Who Wrote a Pop Hit? – Week 2 Challenge Feedback by Rob Wells

Songwriters Association of Canada

Rob-WellsBased on Hit Songwriter/Producer Rob Well’s songwriting challenge issued in Week 2 – over 100 tracks were submitted and vetted by our coaches to a handful submitted to Rob himself for feedback.  

Braeden Mitchell – Music on my Body
https://soundcloud.com/braeden-taylor-mitchell/music-on-my-body-work-tape/s-wTDLs
Rob’s Feedback
Hey Braeden – great job on this song – very catchy with lots of hooks.  My two comments would be that it’s a little sexual… there’s always a fine line as to how far you can go… it just feels a little out of the age range I’m going for.  Second comment is that the chorus should introduce something else other than “Music on my body”… lines 1, 2, and 4 are great for that, but line 3 should have something new introduced with a catchy melody.  Other than that, this is a great song and a great performance from you!  Looking forward to hearing more…. thank…

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